Nowadays families are not as closer as they used to be. What do you think are the causes of this? What can be done to make families closer?

Long

times

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ago,

family

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a family

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gathering is one the most awaited

events

for family

members

. But right now, those activity starts to

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away, especially when pandemics hit really hard.

Furthermore

, the developments of communication technologies cause the bonds between family

members

became

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further

away. Another reason is, kids usually do not have the same perception as

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.

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,

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are several things that can make the families closer again, one of them is annual family visitation.

First

of all, When pandemics happen, The Government prohibit any family gathering that

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mass

crowd

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for

greater

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good. Communications between family

members

are done with teleconferences or video calls. The vibes from video calls are different

than

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face to face talks. These situations are repeated annually due to covid-19

disesase

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disease

are not over yet. Another reason is, the way of thinking from

generations

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to

generations

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generation

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are changing. Kids nowadays do not understand the conversations between adults, vice versa. It creates

a

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huge

gaps

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between family

members

. For solving the matters, the family gathering

events

can be shifted into

annuals

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family visitation. Every

years

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, one different family is selected to be the host of the

events

.

With

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this

method, it will strengthen the bonds between family

member

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members

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. The complimentary for

this

method is the

eldelry

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elderly

should pay attention to what modern kids

into

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right now

,

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so that conversation between generations can be linked up. In conclusion, Pandemics and gaps in age are the two reasons that cause the bonds between

family

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a family

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getting weak.

Furthermore

, the developments of Communication technologies causing the distance to get

further

away. To solve the problems, the annual

events

should

done

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in different places based on the location of each family

members

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member

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.