Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, most
food
companies are used to composing foodstuff with high
sugar
,
although
it increases the
health
issues
such
as diabetes and heart disease. Some
people
argued that by raising the cost of sugary cuisine, absorbing
this
food
can be alleviated. I strongly disagree with
this
statement and I will discuss my opinion with an example
further
. On the one hand, for mitigating these
health
issues there are a lot of solutions, here I would like to mention one form of these and it is exercise. we know exercise has different forms
such
as swimming, running, skipping rope, pushing up and so on and all of these forms are crucial for decreasing obesity and
health
problem.
For instance
, If we take China as an example we can see that
although
they eat sugary foods especially drinks they are skinny and fit because of walking and running.
On the other hand
, to embark
this
essay, it is true that
sugar
is very detrimental for
people
, at the same time, increasing the price of
sugar
can not decrease the consumption of sugary
food
by
people
.
Initially
, few
people
care about the rate if they need to buy
this
sweet stuff.
For example
, In Western cultures, celebrating a birthday or wedding by cutting the cake is a tradition. So, they must be bought a cake on
this
occasion whatever the price is.
As a result
, it is a difficult task to make them stop having these harmful foods only by increasing the rate of
sugar
. In conclusion, rather than enhancing the cost of sweet
food
, governments could be made aware
people
avoid
this
food
or taking exercise would be the good teams to get rid of from these
health
issues.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • health problems
  • manufactured food and drink products
  • sugary products
  • excessive sugar consumption
  • discourage
  • promote
  • healthier choices
  • reduce
  • increased taxes
  • fund
  • health education
  • prevention programs
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