Computers are now the basis of the modern world. They should therefore be introduced into classrooms, and their programs used for direct teaching purposes. However, dependence on computers in teaching may carry a certain degree of risk to students. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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People

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have differing views on whether or not

computers

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are essential in the advancement of technology and ought to be compulsory for the students to teach them, electronic

classes

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. While others believe that

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have a negative effect which can harm

people

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. I think that teaching with

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is the best way to teach the students in the real world. On the one hand, some

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believe

people

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who believe that

computers

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can cause harm to youngsters. According to some, high usage of

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can lead to detrimental effects on folk.

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to say that using laptops for prolonged hours can create health issues

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as eye fatigue, obesity, body fats, etc. from the

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couple of years, these issues have become common worldwide.

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, in 2008, a pair of researchers from Yale University published a study agreeing that communities who work or study in front of

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have found more health problems and they do order fast food often while using the laptop.

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, it is commonly found that issues will sorely arise if teachers will start implementing online

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, I do not think these kinds of arguments stand up for scrutiny as I am in the opinion that providing

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through the internet will provide benefits in the future,

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, some

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have people

who have an indefinite interest in

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, some times their family cannot afford them to send for special

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and if schools will start giving the lectures through online

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they will know about the latest technology and software

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in a piece of recent news, it was mentioned that one of high school student cracked the interview of Google which is equal to ten years experienced person.

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, in the current scenario, most of the companies do ask technical questions whether it is a technical job because the majority of organizations have all the functions on laptops.

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, if they will know from the beginning

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it will be easier for them in the bright future. In conclusion, there are convincing arguments against both views.

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, I maintain my original position that it is important to teach through

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in the fast-track world.

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Computers are now the basis of the modern world. They should therefore be introduced into classrooms, and their programs used for direct teaching purposes. However, dependence on computers in teaching may carry a certain degree of risk to students. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Last week, you visited a local supermarket and you got satisfactory service. Write a letter to the supermarket manager to thank. In your letter: - introduce yourself; - say why you are satisfied; - say thank you and write about your future visits.

organizing a large family celebration such as a wedding can often create problems. what are the possible problems and solutions?

The working week should be shorter and workers should have a longer weekend. DO you agree or disagree?

Each country has its own charity organizations. Sometimes people think that those organizations should only offer help to their own country while others thinks they are supposed to give aid to people in great need wherever they live. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook, Zalo,...) have a negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?