Plastic bags, plastic bottles and plastic packaging are bad for the environment. What damage dose plastic do to the environment? What can be done by government and individuals to solve this problem?

Although
plastic
objects have destructive effects on the environment authorities can come forward with viable solutions to address the situation. On the flip side, the damaging impacts of irresolvable plastics should be noted. These
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can remain
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the soil and water for million
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and pollute our planet.
Besides
, they are
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threat
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animals and marines. If people follow the news about environmental issues, they can see
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examples of hurt species
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were damaged by plastics
such
as bottles or canes.
Moreover
, these
plastic
rubbishes can pollute the water that humans used for drinking, and
consequently
, poison the water and disorder people. Having said that,
however
, prohibitive regulations can be enforced to make sure that the negative aspects are kept at bay.
Firstly
,
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should fine people who throw their
plastic
rubbishes into the environment. The penalties should be both monetary and non-monetary
such
as purifying polluted areas for
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time.
Secondly
, manufacturers should try other ways for packaging their products and produce eco-friendly goods. In conclusion, we should take urgent actions to decrease the
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of
plastic
objects.
Otherwise
, the environment and its
habitants
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hurt badly. Some solutions
such
as specific fines and redesign of
plastic
products would be good
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points.
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