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Plastic bags, plastic bottles and plastic packaging are bad for the environment. What damage dose plastic do to the environment? What can be done by government and individuals to solve this problem?

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plastic
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 objects have destructive effects on the environment authorities can come forward with viable solutions to address the situation. On the flip side, the damaging impacts of irresolvable plastics should be noted. These
residual
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 can remain
into
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 the soil and water for million
years
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 and pollute our planet.
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, they are
serious
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 threat
for
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 animals and marines. If people follow the news about environmental issues, they can see
hundreds
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 examples of hurt species
which
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 were damaged by plastics
such
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 as bottles or canes.
Moreover
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, these
plastic
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 rubbishes can pollute the water that humans used for drinking, and
consequently
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, poison the water and disorder people. Having said that,
however
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, prohibitive regulations can be enforced to make sure that the negative aspects are kept at bay.
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,
government
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the government
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 should fine people who throw their
plastic
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 rubbishes into the environment. The penalties should be both monetary and non-monetary
such
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 as purifying polluted areas for
specific
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 time.
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, manufacturers should try other ways for packaging their products and produce eco-friendly goods. In conclusion, we should take urgent actions to decrease the
amount
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 of
plastic
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 objects.
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, the environment and its
habitants
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inhabitants
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 hurt badly. Some solutions
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 as specific fines and redesign of
plastic
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 products would be good
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.

A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).

Stick to this essay structure:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

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