You want to sell your television. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, explain - why you are selling the television describe the television suggest a date when your friend can come and see it

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Dear Aman, I hope you are in pink of your health.It's been a long since we have had the time to catch up and reminisce about things.let's meet anytime soon if possible.Anyways,I am writing

this

missive to bring to your notice that I am selling my 32 inches Samsung LED

that is

still in guarantee and all its parts are in working condition. I am migrating to Australia and for that reason,I want to sell each and every product that has no use to me now.

Furthermore

,I am facing a financial crisis due to which I require funds to arrange my tickets and to bear other household expenses. I have ordered

this

LED from Amazon and it cost me around Rs 40,000.It's a 6-month-old device with the Samsung original woofers attached to it as well as it has a sleek body that makes the visuals more vivid.

Moreover

,a touch feature is available on the television. I am available

this

weekend as my flight is

Saturday.So,I am planning to visit Chandigarh for shopping purposes.

Therefore

,if you want to purchase the product

then

please make a visit after 10:00am on Saturday or Sunday at your convenience. I look forward to seeing you. Best wishes, Haman

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

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201 words

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