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Some people believe that living in big cities is becoming more difficult. Others believe that it is getting easier. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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People
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 have different views about living in a big
city
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 or a small town. While living in a small town has a lot of advantages, I believe
people
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 are more eager to live in a big
city
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 especially for some youngsters. On the one hand,
people
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 living in a small town enjoy a more relaxing and healthy life than those who live in a big
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.
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, there
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 less traffic in small towns so that the air won’t be polluted a lot by exhaust emissions.
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, with a less developed industry, water
resource
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 can keep cleaner. Fresh air
as well as clean water
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 can definitely lead
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healthier life.
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,
countryside
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the countryside
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 is a good place for
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 living in big
cities
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 to relax
themselves
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. Wandering in a small road with a stretching field is
good
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 way to release stress.
On the other hand
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,
cities
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also
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 can be beneficial in a huge variety of ways.
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 with, the excellent transportation networks make
people
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 feel more convenient to
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work, to visit their friends or to travel around the whole
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. Another function of
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 developed public transportation system is that some private car owners are more likely to give up driving their cars when going out which are able to pollute the air dramatically.
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, parents, whether living in big
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 or small towns, wish to send their children to big
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where
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 usually have wonderful education systems. Teenagers who have received a good education tend to be more competitive in the job market.
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, for young
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 who expect to gain a more promising job, it is wiser to choose to live in big
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. These
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 are full of opportunities which are helpful for young
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 who want to start their own business and develop their own careers. In conclusion, different
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 have different options with regard to
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 issue, but I believe
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 will benefit more if they choose to live in
cities
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.
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