Some people believe that living in big cities is becoming more difficult. Others believe that it is getting easier. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
People
have different views about living in a big city
or a small town. While living in a small town has a lot of advantages, I believe people
are more eager to live in a big city
especially for some youngsters.
On the one hand, people
living in a small town enjoy a more relaxing and healthy life than those who live in a big city
. Firstly
, there are
less traffic in small towns so that the air won’t be polluted a lot by exhaust emissions. Change the verb form
is
In addition
, with a less developed industry, water resource
can keep cleaner. Fresh airFix the agreement mistake
resources
as well as clean water
can definitely leadAdd the comma(s)
, as well as clean water,
a
healthier life. Change preposition
to a
Finally
, countryside
is a good place for Add an article
the countryside
people
living in big cities
to relax themselves
. Wandering in a small road with a stretching field is Remove the pronoun
apply
good
way to release stress.
Add an article
a good
On the other hand
, cities
also
can be beneficial in a huge variety of ways. To begin
with, the excellent transportation networks make people
feel more convenient to to
work, to visit their friends or to travel around the whole Remove the redundancy
apply
city
. Another function of this
developed public transportation system is that some private car owners are more likely to give up driving their cars when going out which are able to pollute the air dramatically. Additionally
, parents, whether living in big cities
or small towns, wish to send their children to big cities
where
usually have wonderful education systems. Teenagers who have received a good education tend to be more competitive in the job market. Correct word choice
that
Finally
, for young people
who expect to gain a more promising job, it is wiser to choose to live in big cities
. These cities
are full of opportunities which are helpful for young people
who want to start their own business and develop their own careers.
In conclusion, different people
have different options with regard to this
issue, but I believe people
will benefit more if they choose to live in cities
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