Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
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country
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researches
and powerfulness in good names or poorness, war threats and genocide in bad names.
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a
country
by winning races and getting the metals or having a chance to Use synonyms
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be held
held
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hold
country
because of the Use synonyms
follwing
reasons. Only the developed or the most developed countries can be Correct your spelling
following
accepected
as the hosts of the events in most cases. By holding the event as the host, numerous Correct your spelling
accepted
people
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country
and it means more Use synonyms
prosperous
in tourism sectors. The travellers and Replace the word
prosperity
sportmen
will have Correct your spelling
sportsmen
tour
on beautiful places, new cuisines, traditional arts and others many remarkable features of the Add an article
a tour
country
. Local Use synonyms
people
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On the other hand
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country
. There is always risk coming with advantages. To hold the international sports event as the host, the government need to use billions of the Use synonyms
country
's money to get good Use synonyms
feedbacks
from participating countries. They need to have the best facilities for the events, the best Fix the agreement mistake
feedback
accomondations
for the participantsCorrect your spelling
accommodations
accommodation
,
and have to prepare for the emergency cases. Especially in Remove the comma
apply
pandemic
era, the Add an article
the pandemic
a pandemic
country
is risking its citizens' health. They will do the necessary procedures to prevent the Use synonyms
virsus
to enter from other countries, but Correct your spelling
virus
still
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,still
those sneaky and unruly
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that sneaky and unruly virsus
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virus
versus
country
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unnnoticely
. The Correct your spelling
unnoticed
unnoticeably
country
can use the spent Use synonyms
billionans
on the international events on the development for its Correct your spelling
billions
country
and bring happiness to its citizens.Use synonyms
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