every year several languages die out .some people think that is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. ti what extent do you agree or dissagree with this opinion?
Every year many
languages
have died. Many citizens believed it is unimportant to preserve other dialects
because this
way will be an easier life if there are less
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fewer
languages
. This
essay completely disagress
with Correct your spelling
disagrees
disagree
this
statement because this
mean
losing history and peoples' identity.
It has been shown that Change the verb form
means
languages
bring knowledge and represent part of a culture. it is important to preserve existint
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existing
dialects
to learn from it
and keep in contact with their citizens. Correct pronoun usage
them
Besides
, it is vital to know other ways of living as well as how they treat diseases, so we can learn from each other. For instance
, in the USA, American Indians spoke their dialect and they taught to their community, so it is commun
that some of the universities Correct your spelling
common
has
adopted these Change the verb form
have
languages
in their educational program. As, a result, many people have been interested to study a foreign language
as well as their culture.
Another reason why is essential to preserver
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preserve
dialects
is to avoid losing peoples' identity because they might learn the local language
but they will lose their connection with ancestors
. It is very substantial that older people get in touch with young generations because they can pass their knowledge, so society can preserve thousands of years Correct pronoun usage
their ancestors
this
way. Also
, it is important to avoid lost
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losing
language
to continue with Add an article
a time
the time
time line
of evolution, so we can evolve as Correct your spelling
timeline
community
. Add an article
a community
For example
, In the USA history, it states how the army took advantages
of the Fix the agreement mistake
advantage
navajo's
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Navajo's
dialectes
to create Correct your spelling
dialects
secreat
codes and communicate with others soldiers, so Correct your spelling
secret
this
helped to win the II war.
To conclude, Correct your spelling
government
goverment
should pass laws to avoid Correct article usage
the goverment
to lose
any Change the verb form
losing
language
to preserve knowledge and keep people's identity.Therefore
, I believe that some of the dialects
should be taught in many universities as a second
language
to keep them alive.Submitted by cuevas14dic on
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