every year several languages die out .some people think that is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. ti what extent do you agree or dissagree with this opinion?

Every year many
languages
have died. Many citizens believed it is unimportant to preserve other
dialects
because
this
way will be an easier life if there are
less
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languages
.
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essay completely
disagress
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disagrees
disagree
with
this
statement because
this
mean
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losing history and peoples' identity. It has been shown that
languages
bring knowledge and represent part of a culture. it is important to preserve
existint
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existing
dialects
to learn from
it
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and keep in contact with their citizens.
Besides
, it is vital to know other ways of living as well as how they treat diseases, so we can learn from each other.
For instance
, in the USA, American Indians spoke their dialect and they taught to their community, so it is
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common
that some of the universities
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adopted these
languages
in their educational program. As, a result, many people have been interested to study a foreign
language
as well as their culture. Another reason why is essential to
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dialects
is to avoid losing peoples' identity because they might learn the local
language
but they will lose their connection with
ancestors
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their ancestors
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. It is very substantial that older people get in touch with young generations because they can pass their knowledge, so society can preserve thousands of years
this
way.
Also
, it is important to avoid
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losing
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any
language
to continue with
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a time
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time line
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of evolution, so we can evolve as
community
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a community
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.
For example
, In the USA history, it states how the army took
advantages
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of the
navajo's
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dialectes
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dialects
to create
secreat
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secret
codes and communicate with others soldiers, so
this
helped to win the II war. To conclude,
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government
goverment
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should pass laws to avoid
to lose
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any
language
to preserve knowledge and keep people's identity.
Therefore
, I believe that some of the
dialects
should be taught in many universities as a
second
language
to keep them alive.
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