Some people think that the best way to reduce the time spent in travelling to work is to replace parks and gardens close to the city center with apartment buildings for commuters. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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consumed for daily

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on working purposes is generally taking up to three-tenth of our available hours. The Farther

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live, the longer

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they spent travelling to work. Some countries decide to built apartment buildings

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to their working

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to reduce travel times. In

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of all, Most

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agree that daily

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are exhausted, especially when they are tired from working full-

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. A recent study shows that three-tenth of

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are stressed because the daily

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take up so much energy and

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. To reduce the stress from daily

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, Some of them choose to reside near working

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parks

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and gardens usually take up so

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in the

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centre. Fast-growing cities should accommodate

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by providing residential areas near work sites.

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, the Hongkong government replace

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parks

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and replace it with two condominiums for accomodating factory

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.

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,

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punctuality increased to nine-tenth in the past two years.

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, the development of the residential areas near working

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are famous for the

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five years for urban planning. The purpose is to maximize

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for productive buildings,

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as offices, retail stores, supermarkets, residences and leisure.

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and Gardens are important, but the placement of the

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and gardens can be rearranged alongside skyscrapers.

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, the government can put a sky garden in every building in the central business districts and open it for public realms.

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, the need for green open

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still can be accommodated

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many buildings are built around the

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centre. In conclusion, it is important to place apartments

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to working areas. It can reduce travel

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and the number of vehicles occupying the streets. The final result is, it will generate low carbon emissions due to most

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choosing to walks for daily

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