Some people think that the best way to reduce the time spent in travelling to work is to replace parks and gardens close to the city center with apartment buildings for commuters. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Time

consumed for daily

commutes

on working purposes is generally taking up to three-tenth of our available hours. The Farther

workers

live, the longer

time

they spent travelling to work. Some countries decide to built apartment buildings

next

to their working

spaces

to reduce travel times. In

this

essay, I am going to explain my opinion about the views.

First

of all, Most

workers

agree that daily

commutes

are exhausted, especially when they are tired from working full-

time

. A recent study shows that three-tenth of

workers

are stressed because the daily

commutes

take up so much energy and

time

. To reduce the stress from daily

commutes

, Some of them choose to reside near working

spaces

.

City

parks

and gardens usually take up so

much

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space

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in the

city

centre. Fast-growing cities should accommodate

workers

by providing residential areas near work sites.

For example

, the Hongkong government replace

city

parks

and replace it with two condominiums for accomodating factory

workers

.

As a result

,

workers

punctuality increased to nine-tenth in the past two years.

Furthermore

, the development of the residential areas near working

spaces

are famous for the

last

five years for urban planning. The purpose is to maximize

city

spaces

for productive buildings,

such

as offices, retail stores, supermarkets, residences and leisure.

Parks

and Gardens are important, but the placement of the

parks

and gardens can be rearranged alongside skyscrapers.

For example

, the government can put a sky garden in every building in the central business districts and open it for public realms.

As a result

, the need for green open

spaces

still can be accommodated

although

many buildings are built around the

city

centre. In conclusion, it is important to place apartments

next

to working areas. It can reduce travel

time

and the number of vehicles occupying the streets. The final result is, it will generate low carbon emissions due to most

workers

choosing to walks for daily

commutes

.