Human activity had had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. SOme people think this cannot be changed with others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both side of views and give your opinion.

Currently, the activity of
people
around the
world
is effect to plants and animals. Some
people
believe that cannot adjust
this
issue, but others believe that everything has a solution. Some behaviour cannot change because has no option for them.
For example
, Thai
people
can not drink water from the tap, so most
people
in Thailand must drink water from the bottle which is made from plastic which is a problem because plastic is a waste product that affects plants and animals if a lot of plastic falls in the river are made wastewater. In my humble ,opinion the government must learn the process from other countries that water from the tap can
drink
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for
reducing
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this
problem.
On the other hand
, others believe that we can change behaviour for protecting plants and animals. Today around the
world
have a lot of campaigns, especially the go green campaign and the recycle campaign which will save the
world
, particularly the new generation.
Hence
the company must adjust the strategy of the company proper with the new generation. A good case in
this
point Longchamp brand announced material of bags are adjusted recycle bags in
this
year because they are concerned with global warming that impacts the
world
and decline using leather material
although
the sales performance will drop. I believe that not far from now a lot of companies have solutions for saving the
world
. In conclusion, some
people
can not activity in some cases because they do not have the solution for
this
issue except the government will help them, but others can change activity for saving the environment around the
world
which is a good start for helping the
world
. Many companies were concerned about
this
issue and tried adjusting the solution to revising
this
happen.
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