Human activity had had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. SOme people think this cannot be changed with others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both side of views and give your opinion.

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Currently, the activity of

people

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around the

world

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is effect to plants and animals. Some

people

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believe that cannot adjust

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issue, but others believe that everything has a solution. Some behaviour cannot change because has no option for them.

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, Thai

people

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can not drink water from the tap, so most

people

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in Thailand must drink water from the bottle which is made from plastic which is a problem because plastic is a waste product that affects plants and animals if a lot of plastic falls in the river are made wastewater. In my humble ,opinion the government must learn the process from other countries that water from the tap can

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for

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this

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problem.

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, others believe that we can change behaviour for protecting plants and animals. Today around the

world

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have a lot of campaigns, especially the go green campaign and the recycle campaign which will save the

world

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, particularly the new generation.

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the company must adjust the strategy of the company proper with the new generation. A good case in

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point Longchamp brand announced material of bags are adjusted recycle bags in

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year because they are concerned with global warming that impacts the

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and decline using leather material

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the sales performance will drop. I believe that not far from now a lot of companies have solutions for saving the

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. In conclusion, some

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can not activity in some cases because they do not have the solution for

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issue except the government will help them, but others can change activity for saving the environment around the

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which is a good start for helping the

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. Many companies were concerned about

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issue and tried adjusting the solution to revising

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happen.

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Human activity had had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. SOme people think this cannot be changed with others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both side of views and give your opinion.

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The best way to solve the world’s environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this .