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News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to write in newspapers.what factors influnce these decision? do you think we become used to bad news? should more good news be reported

#news #editors #broadcast #television #newspapers #factors #influnce #decision
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 with regard to deciding of
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 editors about programs on television and in
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the newspaper
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newspaper
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.A lot of factors to decide for writing the
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 as popular
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 in the country, legal and feedback after sharing the
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.In my humble opinion, editors should share both views that bad
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 for learning and good
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 for sharing good things for everyone.I will explain
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 is crime and gossip
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 page will focus on these
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 more than other
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 because they get to earn from these
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 more.
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need
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 about legal before they will release the
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. The way I see it, the
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 needs to share both
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 to populations for everyone to know what is the happen and solutions for
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 problem.For example, covid-19 situations have a lot of cases of death after they were gotten the vaccine.
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, the
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 needs to show
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 who will protect their life and
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 about
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 problem before they will get it.
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, the report needs to show good
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 too
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 situation. In conclusion,the
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 editors
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 to decide the
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 and
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concern
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 about a factor before
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 it to publish for making sure of the decision.And need to share both of view good and bad
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 to
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 because every need to know what happens in the world and for preparing them life.
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