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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To extend do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your on knowledge or experience.

#people #choices
in the present time, a group of
people
 think that we can make numerous choices in our life. From my perspective, I
definately
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definitely
 agree with the statement for some reasons. The
first
 reason is
that
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the rapid growth of technology.
Although
people
 had been experiencing
a limited options
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limited options
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in their daily life in the past, they found out many choices by using technologies
in
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 their daily bases
such
 as
people
 used to wash their dirty dishes
by
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 their hands almost 5 years ago but since dish wash machine came out, families started taking an advantage of it because it saves their valid time and energies.
Secondly
, more and more companies are coming out with new ideas
on
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 their products and offering more options to their customers in order to attract their attention and sell their
manufactures
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manufacturers
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 faster than
its
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 opponents.
Therefore
, one of the best examples is
that
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 popularity of credit cards. Almost all of the
brends
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brands
 or faculties offer their own credit cards to their members and
people
 get so many choices
too
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 make. Most of the
people
 go for the one that offers zero interest and more discounts and benefits to them. In conclusion, I absolutely agree that individuals are getting more options in their life at
this
 moment because of the development of
the
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artificial
intelligent
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 and companies.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overwhelmed
  • decision fatigue
  • paralysis by analysis
  • consumerism
  • globalization
  • personal autonomy
  • market saturation
  • option overload
  • decision-making process
  • psychological well-being
  • buyer's remorse
  • customization
  • trade-offs
  • minimalism
  • information superhighway
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