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In most parts of the world, people are living longer. What is the possible cause of this situation? Is this a negative or positive development?

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It has been observed , in numerous
countries
 ,folks live longer than before and the rate of older
people
 increased gradually . I believe exploring the causes of
this
 problem assist in finding a suitable solution to help resolve it. Having
a
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clean
air
 could partly account for living longer.Many
countries
 all around the world are rich in natural resources and benefit from
a
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pleasant weather ,
although
 they may have several economic problems.
People
 who are not prone to
air
 pollution are more likely to live longer because
air
 pollution has several adverse effects on one's health in a long run. Some of these
countries
 suffer from starvation and poverty .
However
 , it has been observed ,in these
countries
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people
 live longer than even the
people
 who live in
the
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developed
countries
 .
Researchs
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Researchers
 confirmed that
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air play
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 a vital role in well being. From an economical perspective, having young workforces is a decisive factor in the development of a country . So , the
countries
 that have a higher rate of old
people
 are more likely to encounter the problems
such
 as lack of workforces and they are unable to make progress in their industry . Many
people
 have a negative attitude toward rising the rate of older
people
 . To conclude , even though , the increasing figure for older
people
 contribute to many economical and industrial problems , governments and citizens can remedy the situation . in my opinion , childbearing is a step in the right direction.
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