An annual event was recently held in your area. Now you want to write to the organizers of this event congratulating them on a successful production. Write a letter to the organizers. In your letter, give details of the event mention what you liked the most about the event make a polite criticism of something you thought could be improved

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Dear Sir or Madam, As a member of the Frederick community in the city of Munich, I am writing

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letter to congratulate you on a very successful production of the Folk

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Festival which is held every year in our area. I am pretty sure that other members of our community would

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feel the same way. Anyway,

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folk

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festival takes place in our area every year, but

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probably is the

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time in its history that you managed to attract so many people, not only from our own city but

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from many other parts of our country, with your top class advertising works.

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, your flawless seating arrangement, top-class sound system, and choices of

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just couldn’t be any better.

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, what I really liked the most about the event was that you even allowed the audience to ask different kinds of questions to the present

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artists bout their life and hobbies in a very friendly and casual environment. Of course, you could perhaps arrange even a bigger venue with a more spacious parking area, but, again, other than that, the whole event was simply superb. Many thanks once again. Yours faithfully, Mark Henry

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

201 words

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The Greeting

Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships that people make? Has this been a positive or negative development?

It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishments should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviours to children?

robots and artificial intelligence are being developed to replace humans in the workplace why is this happening do you think this will have a positive?

The increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment. What are the causes of this? What can be done to solve this problem ?

Do you agree or disagree that in the near future the role of teachers will be taken by the technology?