You have bought an electronic equipment and within 2 days , problem started occuring. Write a letter to the Shopkeeper about your dissatisfaction with the product & services. Ask him to find proper solution for the problem.
Dear Sir,
Writing
this
epistle to express my utter annoyance about the services and products which I cater from your store.
For last
ten years , availing your services and never been disappointed but this
time I have to struggle a lot as Last
Monday, On 12th November, Visited your store to buy a laptop, one of your staff member suggested me to buy the latest model of Lenovo laptop . Despite the fact of being new one battery power is getting drained in 20 to 30 minutes ,which must be retained at least for 2 hours. Not only this
, but the touchpad is also
not working appropriately affect my office work.
Although
, I apprised the issue to your customer service department and they assured me to repair or replace it with new one within 2 days, however
, the issue has not been resolved yet so it let down my trust towards your services, I expect to receive a replacement or getting my current laptop repaired within 1 day.
Hoping you will take quick and prompt action and will fix this
problem immediately .
yours sincerely 19 th November , 21
Ritu DhimanSubmitted by ritu1508.dcsa on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite