In some countries it is thought advisable that children begin formal education at four years old, while in others they do not have to start school until they are seven or eight. How far do you agree with either of these views? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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which can lead to depression and 2. help in self-development from
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of
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expand their social have childhood memories It is widely discussed about the appropriate
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their
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that it is greater if
children
commence their formal
education
at four
years
old while others believe that these pupils should begin their
school
lives when they reach seven or eight
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old which is approximately the
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grade in
education
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old, it
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that
children
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and capable of taking care of themselves so it is more likely
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parents, sending out their kids to
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environment at
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at
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, who is incompetent to adapt himself
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miserable
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, one of the kids from my town, was sent to boarding
school
when he was five
years
old.
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difficulty in talking with strangers. From there on, he becomes
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introverted child and rarely speaks with other
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. It is suggested that students in
ages
of four or five
years
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of learning. Entering
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school
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these
ages
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however
, bring humungous benefits for
children
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from
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and
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, self-development can be improved. It is no exaggeration to say that the
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fundamental will lead to
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prosperity in higher
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the same
ages
, interpersonal skills and communicating skills are earned,
children
can build their social networking while can
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childhood memories with friends. In conclusion, it depends on
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situation and what is the foremost way for each child. It is important for
children
to enter
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school
when they are ready.
Nevertheless
, I re-affirm my conviction that there
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a wide range of advantages of applying for
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at the
age
of four or fives
years
old since
children
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environment
and have a good memory among friends.
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