Nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basis and a large number of children play computer games. What are the positive and negative impacts of playing computer games and what can be done to minimize the bad effects? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In our modern world, computers play a vital role which assisting humans in various ways including designing and calculating infrastructure, constructing artwork, analyzing finance work, etc.

However

, there are some groups of people who

use

computers for entertainment and do some things ridiculously.

This

is essay will be shown my opinion about playing

computer

games

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computer

games

. On the one hand, playing

computer

games

have various negative effects. The most obvious disadvantage is unhealthy for the body. When I was a child, I played

computer

games

computer

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games

for at least 6 hours per day. My body is affected by a sedentary lifestyle including physical ailments and eyes diseases. If I had a time machine, I would tell myself in the past to stop playing

computer

games

.

Accordingly

, my friends who

use

computers for enjoyment encounter unhealthy situations.

Thus

, using a

computer

for a long time brings various negative effects to your health.

On the other hand

, juveniles who always play

computer

games

result in good analytical thinking. My friend and I who play

computer

games

when we were young have good grades in mathematics subjects.

Furthermore

, other classes which relate to the calculation will have a better result compared to another classmate. I think puzzle

games

contribute us to practice calculation skills and predict the future event that might be occurred.

Therefore

,

computer

games

have the benefit for children about problem-solving skills. In conclusion, even though

computer

game has

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various benefit for young citizens to practice how to deal with problems, longtime usage can cause many diseases.

Hence

, parent and their offspring must realize to negative effects. The constrain of time interval to

use

a

computer

should be managed.

Therefore

, playing

a

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computer

games

are a positive effect if we

use

them appropriately.