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Nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basis and a large number of children play computer games. What are the positive and negative impacts of playing computer games and what can be done to minimize the bad effects? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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In our modern world, computers play a vital role which assisting humans in various ways including designing and calculating infrastructure, constructing artwork, analyzing finance work, etc.
However
, there are some groups of people who
use
 computers for entertainment and do some things ridiculously.
This
 is essay will be shown my opinion about playing
computer
games
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computer
games
. On the one hand, playing
computer
games
 have various negative effects. The most obvious disadvantage is unhealthy for the body. When I was a child, I played
computer
games
computer
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games
 for at least 6 hours per day. My body is affected by a sedentary lifestyle including physical ailments and eyes diseases. If I had a time machine, I would tell myself in the past to stop playing
computer
games
.
Accordingly
, my friends who
use
 computers for enjoyment encounter unhealthy situations.
Thus
, using a
computer
 for a long time brings various negative effects to your health.
On the other hand
, juveniles who always play
computer
games
 result in good analytical thinking. My friend and I who play
computer
games
 when we were young have good grades in mathematics subjects.
Furthermore
, other classes which relate to the calculation will have a better result compared to another classmate. I think puzzle
games
 contribute us to practice calculation skills and predict the future event that might be occurred.
Therefore
,
computer
games
 have the benefit for children about problem-solving skills. In conclusion, even though
computer
 game has
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various benefit for young citizens to practice how to deal with problems, longtime usage can cause many diseases.
Hence
, parent and their offspring must realize to negative effects. The constrain of time interval to
use
 a
computer
 should be managed.
Therefore
, playing
a
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computer
games
 are a positive effect if we
use
 them appropriately.
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