You have just read an article in an inernational travel magazie which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of magazie. IN your letter - Correct the information in the article - Explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information - Suggest what the magazine should do about this situation
Dear Sir or Madam,
The latest edition of your travel
magazine
included an article about cambridge
, but Change the capitalization
Cambridge
this
contained incorrect information. The writer described the University of Cambridge as being the oldest in the world whereas infact
the oldest university in the Correct your spelling
in fact
english
speaking world is in Oxford. The Change the capitalization
English
university
of Cambridge was founded in 1209, but Oxford was known to have existed in 1096.
A Change the capitalization
University
magazine
such
as yours has an international reputationand
is extremely influential with travel companies and Correct your spelling
reputation and
reputation
indiviuals
alike. It Correct your spelling
individuals
Correct your spelling
is
id
essential that any information published should be accurate and reliable and Correct your spelling
is
i
was genuinely Change the capitalization
I
surprisedthat
the facts had not been checked prior to publication.
I feel that the least the Correct your spelling
surprised that
surprise that
magazine
can do is to publish a correction and an apology in the
Correct article usage
apply
next
months
Change to a genitive case
month's
months'
magazine
. I would also
urge to
ensure that all factual information is thoroughly checked Correct pronoun usage
you to
befor
publication.
Yours faithfully,
Alan JacobCorrect your spelling
before
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