You have just read an article in an inernational travel magazie which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of magazie. IN your letter - Correct the information in the article - Explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information - Suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

Dear Sir or Madam, The latest edition of your travel
magazine
included an article about
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, but
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contained incorrect information. The writer described the University of Cambridge as being the oldest in the world whereas
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in fact
the oldest university in the
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speaking world is in Oxford. The
university
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of Cambridge was founded in 1209, but Oxford was known to have existed in 1096. A
magazine
such
as yours has an international
reputationand
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reputation and
reputation
is extremely influential with travel companies and
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individuals
alike. It
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essential that any information published should be accurate and reliable and
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was genuinely
surprisedthat
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surprised that
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the facts had not been checked prior to publication. I feel that the least the
magazine
can do is to publish a correction and an apology in
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next
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magazine
. I would
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urge
to
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ensure that all factual information is thoroughly checked
befor
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before
publication. Yours faithfully, Alan Jacob
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