You have just read an article in an inernational travel magazie which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of magazie. IN your letter - Correct the information in the article - Explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information - Suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

Dear Sir or Madam, The latest edition of your travel

magazine

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included an article about

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Cambridge

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, but

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contained incorrect information. The writer described the University of Cambridge as being the oldest in the world whereas

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in fact

the oldest university in the

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speaking world is in Oxford. The

university

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University

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of Cambridge was founded in 1209, but Oxford was known to have existed in 1096. A

magazine

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such

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as yours has an international

reputationand

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reputation and

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is extremely influential with travel companies and

indiviuals

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individuals

alike. It

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id

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essential that any information published should be accurate and reliable and

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was genuinely

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surprised that

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the facts had not been checked prior to publication. I feel that the least the

magazine

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can do is to publish a correction and an apology in

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next

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magazine

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. I would

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urge

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ensure that all factual information is thoroughly checked

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before

publication. Yours faithfully, Alan Jacob