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In many countries, fast food is becoming cheaper and more widely available. Do the disadvantages of this outweigh the advantages?

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Fast
food
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 restaurants can only be found in some big cities in Indonesia.
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However
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 in many countries in the world,
people
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 can find decent
food
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 easily and cheaply.
This
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 essay will discuss how the drawbacks of that trend eclipse the benefit, especially for
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 long term.
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 of all, junk
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 is economical for
people
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 with lower
income
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incomes
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. They can eat fast
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with
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 lower prices,
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 they can use their money for other crucial needs. Other than that, fast
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 is efficient, especially for busy
people
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. They can be found prepared fast,
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people
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 with limited break time will be able to eat comfortably.
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, the
people
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 who do not have time for breakfast at home before going to work
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 can buy and eat fast
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, while they are waiting to train
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 the station.
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 of all, convenience
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 gives rise to some health problems because of its ingredients. A serving of junk
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 contains many calories that give a bad impact on the body. For modern
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, unhealthy
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 habits usually will be compounded with
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fewer
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exercises
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exercise
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 and
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activities
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activity
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.
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 unhealthy lifestyle risks the rise of diseases
such
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 as obesity, high blood pressure, diabetes, and heartache in the long term. To sum up,
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 fast
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 gives benefits for more efficiency and more economical, fast
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 is unhealthy
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 which gives a bad effect
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 health especially in future.
Consequently
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, junk
food
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 which is becoming cheaper and more widely available presents more disadvantages compared to its advantages
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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