Some teachers think that international student exchange would be beneficial for all teenage school students. Do you think its advantages will outweigh the disadvantages?

Motivation letter My desire to get
education
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in
Canada
is based on several things that are very important to me.
First
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if
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all,
Canada
is an amazing and interesting place
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that
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provides the best opportunities for higher
education
studies because
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education
in
Canada
is considered
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one of the best in the world. There are plenty of well-known and prestigious universities and colleges and one of them is
Humber
College
.
Humber
College
Institute of Technology and Advanced
Leraning
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Learning
is appealing to me due to its prestige,
high class
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education
and tolerance to national diversity among students.
Humber
College
provides a great opportunity to delve into the essential aspects of
business
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the business
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including marketing, e-
commrce
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commerce
, accounting,
business
writing and communications.
Moreover
,
Humber
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Business
Managament
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Management
program gives not only theoretical knowledge but
also
practical experience like working in
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.
College
offers modern
facillities
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facilities
like cutting-edge technology which makes
study
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process more interesting and productive.
Moreover
,
Canada
provides
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opportunity
opportuinity
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to make
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connection
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and communicate with people from different countries which helps to broaden horizons and discover new
neccessary
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necessary
knowledge about culture, history and other interesting information about different nations. As for my background, it has
also
helped me to set goals of getting
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in
Canada
. I have been learning English since
first
grade. Since five grade I
relized
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realized
that English will help me a lot in my future career so I have started to give more attention to
this
language.
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, I have started to familiarize
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culture
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the culture
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of English-speaking countries and
this
is when I got fascinated by
Canada
, its wonderful nature,
national
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diversity and high level of security. Studying Social Studies and Economics in school gave me a general idea of
such
aspects of
business
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as negotiation,
business
law and
problem solving
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.
This
background knowledge
also
has inspired me to study in
Canada
.
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