PEOPLE NOWADAYS SLEEP LESS THAN THEY USED TO IN THE PAST. WHAT DO YOU THINK IS THE REASON BEHIND THIS? WHAT ARE THE EFFECTS ON INDIVIDUALS AND PEOPLE AROUND THEM?
Nowadays,taking a rest for yourself is very essential to overcome
the
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health related
issues.While some civilians are not taking enough Add a hyphen
health-related
night
rest then
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than
However
,it is affecting both individuals and society.This
essay will discuss the reasons for this
trend and explain the impact it has on individuals and those around them.
To begin
with,there are several reasons behind this
trend.First
and foremost,generally in India
every family has sole earners.Add a comma
,India
Therefore
,people are working Correct your spelling
overnight
over
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overnight
night
and do plenty of work
to fulfill
the basic requirements.Change the spelling
fulfil
For instance
,if an individual is a taxi driver he is doing extra work
after the working hours to get more remuneration so,he do
not acquire enough sleep because of lots of Change the verb form
does
work
.Moreover
,the major problem faced by the civilians which
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apply
is
traffic.Change the verb form
are
Hence
,people leave's
their homes early morning to overcome the situation but they sleep Correct your spelling
leave
late
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a late
night
because of Change preposition
at night
hectic
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a hectic
the hectic
schedule
.Eventually,it will have Fix the agreement mistake
schedules
impact
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an impact
the impact
to
their sleep hours.
The effect's of sleep can be extremely harmful.Change preposition
on
Firstly
,it will directly harm
to Replace the word
harmful
human
body.Add an article
the human
Although
if a citizen do
not take proper sleep at Change the verb form
does
night
,he might be suffering from big health related
issues.Add a hyphen
health-related
For example
,layman
become frustrated and behave badly with everyone.Fix the agreement mistake
laymen
Secondly
,if humankind cut off their sleeping time
and doing
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do
work
then
they do not concentrate on work
and to the
some extent Remove the article
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loss
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lost
the
job.Change the word
their
Lastly
,it affects daily interaction.To explain,they find it little
bit challenging to spare their Add an article
a little
time
for fun with family members or friends.
To conclude,it is very important for every individual to take enough sleep otherwise
it will lead to some critical condition.Therefore
,manage your time
and get relaxed whenever you have lesiure
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leisure
time
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