some people say History is one of most important school subjects other people think that, in today world,subject like science and technology are more important than History.

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is one of the most important curriculums in school. Others think, nowadays, subjects like

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and

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are more significant than

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. In my opinion, I think both

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,

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and

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are very important

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reasons.

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can make

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understand the past of the country, by

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the historic knowledge and

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the background of nations,

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will be aware of the

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development

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an objective angle. It is significantly and good for our society and future.

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, compare to nowadays peaceful, in the past human had

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wartime. Many young

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have not been

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that era but can learn it from

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subject in School.

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elder family have been lived in that time,

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experience couldn’t draw the reason and an objective picture for a huge subject

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as wars. To teach the

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the reason, the evolvement and the result of the war, including how the war

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world pattern, our

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, development of the countries nowadays are extremely important.

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can learn lessons from bad

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can predict future

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, understand the

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, eventually prevent the war happen again.

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, now,

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are rapidly growing, individuals have

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immense needs and desires

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improve and develop two industries.

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, the existence of diseases and epidemic push human have to evolve

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and

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as fast as they can.

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, the break out of the Covid-19 still undergoing and disturbing many

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’s daily life in the whole world.

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have the needs that want to learn more knowledge of

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for invention and solution for against

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virus. The invention and the production of

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medicines and vaccines are extremely useful nowadays. Thereby,

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stage of

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are huge behind

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the situation that human

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facing at the moment. In my opinion, I think both

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,

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and

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are hugely critical to

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. Individuals

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learn

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for knowing the background of the world, keep the Anti-war thoughts in everyone’s mind.

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,

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also

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need to learn

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prevent diseases and cure

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sickness. To sum up,

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can make

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have

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anti-war minds, while

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and

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will give

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future and hope when facing

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diseases from

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nature.