Some people say that protecting the environment is the governments’ responsibility. others believe that every individual should take responsibility for it. Discuss Both views and give your opinion.

Our
environment
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is facing alarming situations of global warming, greenhouse gas effect, climate change etcetera. Some people believe that it is the
responsibility
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of the
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to save the
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, whilst, some schools of thought consider that individuals should take
responsibility
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to save the
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. In my opinion, administrative authorities and the public both are responsible
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protecting the
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. I will explain both views on safeguarding the
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my opinion in the upcoming paragraphs. I will first discuss the views of those who consider that environmental protection is the sole
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of the
government
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. The foremost reason that
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can save the
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is a budget. Authorities have enough funds to manage the
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.
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, they can invest money to build sites where natural or biodegradable
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can be used to produce natural energy. In
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way,
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can be used in a useful manner,
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, no damage to the surroundings. Governments can join hands with other countries in research and development projects, resulting in, launching the technology or goods that ensure less or no pollution,
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as eco-friendly products, battery vehicles and so on.
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, some pupils think that governments have a lot of burden for various other social and economic development projects namely, creating jobs, reducing poverty, reducing poor and rich differences by boosting the economy and many more.
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, it is the duty of communities to protect the
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. People should not throw
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in the open area,
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, they should put it in
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bins by separating them into different bins
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as organic, recyclable, and garbage bins. Apart from that, they should wisely use natural resources
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as water, avoid using fireworks during celebrations and festival times, and avoid the usage of polybags. In spite of
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, they must use eco-friendly products, battery vehicles, cotton bags etcetera. By considering themselves responsible for protecting the
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, people can make a difference. In conclusion, I wrap up my essay by saying that putting
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on one group is an unwise decision. It is a time of collaborative approach where everyone understands their duties towards the
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, and takes responsible actions that eventually bring sustainability to the
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. Thereby, the
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should assign money to projects to uplift the environmental condition, and the general public
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make practical decisions
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buying or using a product.

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Your introduction clearly presents the topic and your opinion. However, try to make your thesis statement more specific.
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Your paragraphs are organized well, but connecting words (like 'firstly', 'moreover', 'in addition') can improve the flow.
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You gave good examples, but try to add a few more specific details to support your points more strongly.
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The writing has a clear opinion throughout, which helps the reader understand your stance clearly.
coherence cohesion
The conclusion effectively summarizes your main points and reinforces your view on shared responsibility.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • Sustainable development
  • Eco-friendly
  • Conservation
  • Renewable resources
  • Carbon footprint
  • Emissions
  • Biodiversity
  • Climate action
  • Grassroots
  • Legislation
  • Environmental stewardship
  • Recycling
  • Deforestation
  • Greenhouse gases
  • Ecological balance
  • Public awareness
  • Habitat preservation
  • Corporate social responsibility
  • Ecosystem services
  • Pollution control
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