Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

Some would argue that parents ought to teach their children how to be responsible citizens while others say that

school

is the best place to learn about

this

. While believing that

school

is responsible for showing the student how to behave, I believe that it is better for parents to instil

value

in their child to behave well in society. On the one hand, tutoring

students

through

school

and delegating to the teacher the responsibility to instruct

students

a model for good behaviour,

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could be for them a titanic effort.

This

is due that the teacher

are

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really well prepared to teach a specific subject but they could lose focus if they take additional responsibility.

For example

, in the

past

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it was a trend to inculcate

student

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students

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about the role model to follow but in the

end

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this

system was a failure and the duties of the teachers have changed since

then

.

However

, I believe that

this

does not solve the problem because instilling

value

through

school

is not the best method for

students

to learn good modal.

On the other hand

, parents should be the mentor of their children to be good citizens. By showing them the rules of our society, teaching them the different values and how to apply them in their daily life with other people.

Therefore

, the best way for them to learn about behaviour is from their home.

For example

, it is customary for people in Japan to work with their children at the very early ages the way that they need to behave,

that is

why Japan is considered one of the best countries for people of good

value

. I believe

this

method is preferable because it is easy to learn the

value

and to follow our parent’s examples. In conclusion,

although

teachers can help

students

to follow good values in their life, it is not their main function and responsibility and

that is

why it is more important to pass the

value

on them at home.