plastic bags, plastic bottles and plastic packaging are bad for the environment. what damage does plastic do to the environment? what can be done by governments and individuals to solve this problem?

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Nowadays,
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been causing massive environmental pollution and it has been a prevailing concern in
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part of the world. The purpose of
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light on some related measures. There are myriad
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reasons which will
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argument but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that the extinction of animals and plants. By adding these hazardous goods in the circle of nature, a lot of types of animals use them for food and they could not digest and leads to some problems for them or died. Another pivotal aspect of
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trend is that the world's oceans are the largest waste bucket for
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and there are many entire islands that are fully covered with polythene pests.
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, In most industrial countries all around the world, factories that construct these items habitually spill their
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wastes into the rivers and oceans.
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to creating plastics that we cannot ignore if we want to survive. Undoubtedly, every lock has a key.
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, some solutions should be implemented by the governments and should ban
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to prevent
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damaging the environment.
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, paper bags or any other material can be used
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of
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be aware of recyclable and non-recyclable waste. To justify, I would like to quote an example of a survey which was conducted by Melbourne
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, Australia. The survey revealed the findings that
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75% of the major cities of all the country it has been
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mandatory to keep separate bins for both
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of waste materials and are
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take appropriate measures. To recapitulate, unquestionably,
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problem has been a burning question of the day.
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should come forward to mitigate
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • plastic pollution
  • ecosystems
  • wildlife
  • climate change
  • fossil fuels
  • air pollution
  • strict regulations
  • plastic consumption
  • eco-friendly alternatives
  • sustainable packaging
  • recycling facilities
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