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Some people think that dangerous extreme sports such as rock climbing and sky-diving should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

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Since my childhood, I have been taught to enjoy work and play in equanimity. Born and raised in Pune, I have grown up amidst the hilly regions.
Me
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 and my friends used to go on small treks during school vacations, creating playful moments and memories for life. Gradually, trekking and rock climbing became one of my favourite leisure activities. I thoroughly enjoy
adventure
sports
; recently during my
last
 business trip to Dubai, I did sky-diving with my office colleagues and our video received a million views on Instagram.
Adventure
sports
 have not only given me thrilling and exciting experiences
,
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 but
also
 made me a responsible person.
Adventure
sports
such
 as rock climbing or sky-diving are meant to be learnt and performed carefully.
Sports
 are
integral
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 part of our lives and
teaches
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 us skills
which
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 cannot be learnt in the four walls of a classroom. Rock climbing has taught me
qualities
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 of patience and perseverance. There are people who play
adventure
sports
 and perform stunts without learning them or receiving professional guidance, rising their precious lives.
As a result
 of it, many media houses and intellectuals are raising voices against
adventure
sports
 and terming
it
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them
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 as dangerous extreme
sports
. In my opinion, it is inherently wrong to ban any
sports
, especially
adventure
sports
, which brings out the qualities like
courage
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 of the youth and teaches them to play responsibly. It is
utmost
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of utmost
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 necessity to take care of oneself in
adventure
sports
, but banning them is an extreme measure against millions of
adventure
sports
 lovers across the globe.
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