You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. • Correct the information in the article • Write a letter to the editor of the magazine to give correct information • Suggest what the magazine should do about this situation?

Dear Sir or Madam, I am a regular reader of your magazine and I am writing you to draw your kind attention to the recent article published in your magazine in “Curly Tales” section regarding my town “Goa”. The article stated that the water activities have been shut down since
last
month and are misleading.
To begin
with, Goa is a place of adventures and ecstatic water sports. The activities like scuba diving,
snorkeling
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is operational and were never suspended. The rejuvenating activities are a major tourist concern and the misinformation will lead to major economic loss to local people who runs their business on tourism.
Hence
, I would be grateful, if you could release an updated piece mentioning the correct details and apologizing to the public for providing false knowledge. As the book has enormous followers across the globe, the misinformation will get instilled amongst the masses overnight I am looking forward to seeing the corrected version in the near future. Yours faithfully. Neha Jaiswal
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Rectify
  • Misrepresentation
  • Tourism
  • Editor
  • Credibility
  • Accuracy
  • Local heritage
  • Fact-checking
  • Repercussions
  • Counteractive measures
  • Publishing ethics
  • Clarification
  • Factual error
  • Misconception
  • Authenticity
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