very year several languages die out .some people think that is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. to what extent do you agree or dissagree with this opinion?

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
Nowadays, the development of technology influences the way we live.Changes in our method of shopping are one of the implications of
this
Linking Words
development.These days, more and more
people
Use synonyms
are interested in online shopping which causes the end of the era of physical stores.I ,
however
Linking Words
, disagree with
this
Linking Words
notion due to following reasons. One of the most important reasons should
first
Linking Words
of all be mentioned here is , the lack of trust in online
shops
Use synonyms
.Windows shopping still is the
first
Linking Words
preference among many
people
Use synonyms
, because they want to be sure of the quality of the product that they are going to buy , by
this
Linking Words
kind of purchasing buyer will be able to touch what they want to buy , in the case of clothes shopper can try it on before they pay for it ,
moreover
Linking Words
,lot of
people
Use synonyms
usually like to buy the special products in person, buying gold is a good example of
this
Linking Words
issue because shoppers are not sure about the authenticity of their
shops
Use synonyms
.
In addition
Linking Words
, virtual shopping can nat be practical throughout the world.In some developing countries, there are many illiterate
people
Use synonyms
who do not know how to use the internet or even a simple mobile phone ,African countries are another examples, where dwellers suffer from poor infrastructures, definitely using the internet is not common in
this
Linking Words
regions. To conclude,the presence of the internet is very much ubiquitous
consequently
Linking Words
online shopping will develop
further
Linking Words
but
shops
Use synonyms
in towns and cities will not be closed due to a lack of trust in virtual
shops
Use synonyms
,
on the other hand
Linking Words
, it is not practical everywhere.
Submitted by rezakiani525 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: