Question: education is the single most important factor in the development of a country. Do you agree?

Increasing the level of

education

has been viewed as the sheer essential medium for a

society

to be accounted as a developed one.

Although

I agree that

education

is an integral component of a community to grow, it is noteworthy to bear in mind that there are other entities that deserve to be taken into account for the development of a country. I will discuss two rationales to elaborate the importance of

education

in

this

essay which is proceeding by two other valuable subjects of

this

goal.

First

, university-graduated citizens have been playing increasingly important roles in developing a country's industry. Managing the modern style of the economy is not plausible unless being trained for new technologies.

For example

, growing a small cloth company might have been feasible in the past but nowadays it is an arduous job unless hiring a manager who attended

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MBA course.

Subsequently

, surviving in

this

competetive

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competitive

era not only needs graduated ones but

also

requires a continuum

education

due to the

spead

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speed

spread

of industrial improvement.

Secondly

, the role of universities in nurturing well-behaved humans is out of the question. Universities had been viewed as a

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of training careers for years but recently people are taking a fresh look at them. A great number of courses are being provided with the focus

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humans' personality fostering.

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,

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communication skill is the most useful course

that is

available at the developed countries' schools.

Hence

residents of a community constitute its

society

, the more instructed ones can make the more developed countries. Though the above-said reasons clearly demonstrate the blatant role of

education

, the

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health and wealth are two other entities that are fundamental in shaping a developed community. To illustrate, the financial difficulties and

consequently

the mental health ailments contributed to a sick

society

in Iran despite

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thousands educated citizens. To sum up, educating youngsters needs to be located above all to

develope

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develop

a country and it is rooted in the necessity of trained workers for handling the industry and well-trained humans to form an advance civilation. I believe that it is essential but it is not enough. Health and wealth are

also

essential for a

society

in addition

to

education

.