Question: education is the single most important factor in the development of a country. Do you agree?

Increasing the level of

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has been viewed as the sheer essential medium for a

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to be accounted as a developed one.

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I agree that

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is an integral component of a community to grow, it is noteworthy to bear in mind that there are other entities that deserve to be taken into account for the development of a country. I will discuss two rationales to elaborate the importance of

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goal.

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, university-graduated citizens have been playing increasingly important roles in developing a country's industry. Managing the modern style of the economy is not plausible unless being trained for new technologies.

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, growing a small cloth company might have been feasible in the past but nowadays it is an arduous job unless hiring a manager who attended

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MBA course.

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, surviving in

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competetive

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era not only needs graduated ones but

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requires a continuum

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due to the

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speed

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of industrial improvement.

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, the role of universities in nurturing well-behaved humans is out of the question. Universities had been viewed as a

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of training careers for years but recently people are taking a fresh look at them. A great number of courses are being provided with the focus

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humans' personality fostering.

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communication skill is the most useful course

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available at the developed countries' schools.

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residents of a community constitute its

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, the more instructed ones can make the more developed countries. Though the above-said reasons clearly demonstrate the blatant role of

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, the

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health and wealth are two other entities that are fundamental in shaping a developed community. To illustrate, the financial difficulties and

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the mental health ailments contributed to a sick

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thousands educated citizens. To sum up, educating youngsters needs to be located above all to

develope

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develop

a country and it is rooted in the necessity of trained workers for handling the industry and well-trained humans to form an advance civilation. I believe that it is essential but it is not enough. Health and wealth are

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essential for a

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in addition

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to

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