In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case?
Today, even though agriculture is developed very fast, many individuals in the world still go hungry. I will explain the reason for number of agricultural facilities were destroyed by these
this
phenomenon and give a solution to this
problem.
Firstly
, I think, the reason for
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this
situation occurs is because
many environmental problems and natural Replace the word
that
disasters
still disturbing
farming. Wrong verb form
disturb
For example
, in Japan, every year earthquakes
happen significantly frequently. Thus
,Change the article
a
the
disasters
, after earthquakes
and floods, people
have
no place to live, Wrong verb form
had
also
couldn't have sufficient food by this
huge loss and tragic situation.
Secondly
, regarding the solution of
these problems, I think the Change preposition
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government
and respectively industries should take the
responsibility and make some Correct article usage
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policy
or ideas Fix the agreement mistake
policies
on
reducing the hungry Change preposition
for
people
. For instance
, in Japan, the Japanese government
improved serval policies and insurance for hungry people
that suffered from disasters
such
as earthquakes
and floods.The government
will invest in the factories and local farm corporates to reconstruct the factories that were destroyed in disasters
and operate experts in different industries, much
foods to local places to support individuals refugees. Change the quantifier
many
Moreover
, scientists could go to the area to help the farmland back to the welfare soil that can farm again. However
, the good result of this
solution could take a long time,
but still can help hungry Remove the comma
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people
in a critical hard time.
In conclusion, in my opinion, I think the reason for the hungry people
phenomenon could be natural disasters
such
as earthquakes
and floods. On the other hand
, I believe government
and many industries experts could help those people
and try to make local places back to the welfare environment again.Submitted by littlekongmy on
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