In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case?

Today, even though agriculture is developed very fast, many individuals in the world still go hungry. I will explain the reason for
this
phenomenon and give a solution to
this
problem.
Firstly
, I think, the reason
for
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this
situation occurs is
because
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many environmental problems and natural
disasters
still
disturbing
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farming.
For example
, in Japan, every year
earthquakes
happen significantly frequently.
Thus
,
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number of agricultural facilities were destroyed by these
disasters
, after
earthquakes
and floods,
people
have
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no place to live,
also
couldn't have sufficient food by
this
huge loss and tragic situation.
Secondly
, regarding the solution
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these problems, I think the
government
and respectively industries should take
the
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responsibility and make some
policy
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or ideas
on
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reducing the hungry
people
.
For instance
, in Japan, the Japanese
government
improved serval policies and insurance for hungry
people
that suffered from
disasters
such
as
earthquakes
and floods.The
government
will invest in the factories and local farm corporates to reconstruct the factories that were destroyed in
disasters
and operate experts in different industries,
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foods to local places to support individuals refugees.
Moreover
, scientists could go to the area to help the farmland back to the welfare soil that can farm again.
However
, the good result of
this
solution could take a long time
,
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but still can help hungry
people
in a critical hard time. In conclusion, in my opinion, I think the reason for the hungry
people
phenomenon could be natural
disasters
such
as
earthquakes
and floods.
On the other hand
, I believe
government
and many industries experts could help those
people
and try to make local places back to the welfare environment again.
Submitted by littlekongmy on

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • inequality
  • distribution
  • access to resources
  • climate change
  • natural disasters
  • political factors
  • economic factors
  • agricultural practices
  • infrastructure
  • transportation
  • population growth
  • education
  • knowledge
  • food waste
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