Some people believe that children should be banned from using their phones during the school day. Others believe that children should be allowed to use their phones. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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that schools ought to prohibit the use of

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at school, while others take the stance that using

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gadgets should be

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permitted

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I will give my own perspective on the matter. On one hand, there are many people who argue that juveniles must not use phones during classes. The main reason for

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is that using

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device while at school might distract them from learning.

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of being paying attention to the teacher,

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may be looking at Instagram and Twitter.

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, having

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available to be

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any time might

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children to cheat on tests when they do not know the answer, or even share with their

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resolutions from exames.

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, negatively influencing their learning process. In spite of these considerations, it is

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possible to make the opposing case. It is argued that

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are tools that can be used to help

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and teachers when an emergency appear. People have

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opinion because they

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about their children, and with phones available, parents are able to be connected with them. To illustrate, many shooting attempts in schools were controlled because the

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were able to call immediately the police.

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, as classes are having a lot of

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with only one teacher, sometimes a

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check on the internet might bring the answer for a small question during a class. In conclusion, I believe that both arguments have their merits. On balance,

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, I tend to believe that banning

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is more beneficial to

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during their learning process as they will be able to keep their attention to the knowledge being taught, as well as it will decrease their chances of cheating in

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