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Some people think that companies should provide employees with exercise time during the day. What is your opinion?

#people #companies #employees #exercise #time
The graphs illustrate the development of
computers
 possession from the years 2002 until 2010 based on two variables, which is the
computers
 ownership rates based on population and educational degrees. Overall, from the
year
 2002 until 2010, the
number
 of
computers
 sales are increasing gradually for both variables.
Firstly
, from the
year
 2022 until 2010, the
number
 of people owning a computer is increased by two-tenths with the average percentage being 5
percent
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 per
year
. In the
year
 2002,
computers
 ownership is fifty-five
percent
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,
furthermore
, for the
year
 2020, the
number
 reaches seventy-five
percent
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.
Secondly
, based on educational degrees, all the
number
 is increased. the highest increase from the
year
 2002 until 2010 is high school graduates and colleges students with three-tenths for both of them. Meanwhile, the lowest growth are bachelors degrees and postgraduate with twenty
percent
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