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Some say you should always marry for love; others say that in an uncertain world it is wiser to marry for money. Discuss both points of view and give your own opinion.

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As an introduction, marriage is a lifelong bonding between two persons and it must be a mutual relationship. Apart from marrying for
love
, nowadays there are couples getting married for
money
.
Both
 points have their own reason.
Love
 is a power. It drives
both
 husband and wife to work hard for their life. With true happiness within,
both
 of them can properly plan for their future life.
For example
, my neighbour now owns a successful food business.
To begin
 with,
both
 of them are poor economically. They fall in
love
 and get married ,
subsequently
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 they support and complement each other. They slowly built up their business and wealth. In
this
 challenging world, it is wise to be paired with a person with a stable economical background.
Money
 is crucial of course, new bonded spouses need
money
 to purchase their house and vehicle
then
 later, they need to support their offspring as well. Through
a
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stable income
families
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, more opportunities can be offered to the spouse and kid. Studies had shown that teenagers who come from poor socioeconomic backgrounds families predisposed to various crimes. In conclusion, whatever reason two persons get tied up either by
love
 or by
money
, the most important thing is their happy life ever after.
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