You recently went to concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell him how you feel. Write a letter to the singer Say how you feel about his performance Give detail of your musical activities Explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities.

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Dear sir, I am writing

this

letter with regards to praise your performance at a concert held a week ago. My whole family is your big fan, especially me. We all love your singing skills and your personality. One month back a concert by many good singers was announced for which we all decided to attend it must. And after listening and enjoying all of them only your voice was worth listening and heart touching and the whole crowd was calling your name only. I felt very relaxed after listening to you because it left a soothing effect on my heart and soul. I love to sing and play musical instruments like the piano, and I am in touch with these since my childhood. I had attended many classes to improve my skills. Now I am very good at singing in Pashto and Urdu,

however

, I am still struggling a lot to sing in English as it is my dream. I request you to give me some tips on how to play the piano with English verses and to sing with it at the same time as you do. Your English songs are very deep and full of expertise. I would be grateful to u for your cooperation. Yours faithfully, Sana

Submitted by drsanaghani on Fri Feb 18 2022

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