The use of mobile phones in public places is as antisocial as smoking. Smoking is banned in certain places, so mobile phones should be banned in the same way. To what extent to you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, some
people
have opinions about using electronic devices in cultural locations is as unacceptable as smoking,
moreover
, smoking is prohibited in special areas, so mobile devices need to be included in
this
list too. I absolutely disagree with
this
statement,
furthermore
, I think using mobile
phones
doesn't cause damage for others unlike smoking, and some
people
make content in public
places
which can help make
this
location more popular.
First
of all, using mobile
phones
and smoking cigarettes are two different things so we can't talk about it in one way.
In other words
, if some
people
smoke it can harm the health of others, as harmful smoke comes from it,
in contrast
, if
people
use a cell phone in the same situation it can only cause some little problems to the visitors.
For example
, in the most visited
places
, every person uses
phones
because it is more comfortable and makes life easier,
moreover
, it replaces photo cameras, wallets and citizens don't have to take a lot of things.
Secondly
, today more and more
people
use social media where they post photos from their vacation. One of the main reasons why
people
visit popular
places
is to make interesting content that their subscribers will like, and it is
also
a good advertisement.
For example
, my favourite blogger made an interesting post about some
places
and I wanted to visit
this
place. In conclusion, I want to write that it is not normal to prohibit the use of
phones
in public
places
,
firstly
, it does not harm the health of others, and
secondly
, it is free advertising to increase the popularity of the place.
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