In modern society teachers are a less important source of knowledge for young children compared with the past. Discuss how far you agree with this statement?

Over the past ten years or so there have been an increasing number of parents and educational experts

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whether

teachers

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in modern

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become a less important source of

knowledge

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for young

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compared with the past. Some parents believe that

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are less important for their

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to acquire

knowledge

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because of the significant amount of online open courses.

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, some educational experts suggest that

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still play an important role in teaching young

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as they could give their

students

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more direct suggestions and feedback face-to-face without any

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and why I believe that

teachers

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are more important for young

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to acquire their

knowledge

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for the following reasons.

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of all, it is generally accepted that young

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in modern

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could access

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easier compared with the past.

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, a considerable number of online open courses could be provided by

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non-profit organizations or schools, which could give more options for young

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to learn more different expertise or

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, Khan Academy and Udemy, which are online platforms for self-studying, have been extremely popular over the past five years.

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, these platforms could provide young

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or

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with greater opportunities to learn some difficult subjects

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as Calculus, Biochemistry and Physics with relatively low costs and flexible time schedules to arrange their own study paces without any

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or difficulties.

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, it can be asserted that

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could be more significant for young

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or

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to acquire

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in modern

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.

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,

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could provide not only their expertise but

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their personal experiences or perspectives, which could lead their

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to find their own interests.

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, it is widely believed that modern

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’ roles have changed significantly over the past ten years because an increasing number of

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’

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as truancy and internet addiction happened frequently, and

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could face these

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and need to adjust their roles from mentors to

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to assist their

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to cultivate the right

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and attitudes toward the schools and

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. In conclusion, it has been argued that

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could play a key role in teaching young

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in modern

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because they could provide their

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with more effective means

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as counselling and personal experiences or perspectives to assist their

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to acquire not only enough

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but

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important personal independent skills, including communication and leadership. I believe that these benefits will outweigh the advantages of learning through online open courses because

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need both sufficient

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and correct values toward their life and

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.