Some people are of the opinion that children should be rewarded for good behaviour. Others think they should be punished for bad behaviour. Discuss both views and give your personal opinion and reasons.

Quite a few people believe that if a

child

is well mannered,

then

he should be provided with gifts. On other hand, certain people are of the opinion that if a

child

is

ill mannered

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then

he must be punished. In

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essay, we will be discussing both sides of the opinion and providing our

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view point

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on the matter. In my opinion, if a

child

behaving well is conditioned with a prize or a gift

then

the

child

becomes habituated to

such

an action. Incentivising

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children's

childrens

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actions in the growing up years can have a detrimental effect later on.

for instance

, In the absence of a gift, kids have a tendency to put up a fuss and they will not understand the true reason

of

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being mannered.

furthermore

, they will start treating their own

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pattern as a trade rather than

character building

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exercise.

On the other hand

, punishing kids for their moods will leave a negative imprint on their young minds.

Consequently

, having a major impact as they grow up. Any punishing act

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will result in children being scared to express themselves, making them

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under-confident

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under confident

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.

For example

, a survey conducted in

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found that people who were punished when young

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found it difficult to make friends later on in life and prefer to be loners. In conclusion, Rewarding and punishing for the behaviour of a

child

have their demerits. In my view, a

child

must be allowed to behave as he wants with certain rules and regulations in place by parents along with constant monitoring