Some people like to try new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with. Discuss both these attitudes and give your opinion.
There are different
people
in the world now. Some people
like to eat in different places
. Some prefer to eat only in certain
Add an article
a certain
place
. I think it is better to eat in the same Fix the agreement mistake
places
places
.
Many people
like to eat in different places
because they can adapt to any place
and they get bored of eating in the same places
. As they like to eat everywhere, their worldview will also
be bored
. Wrong verb form
boring
Such
people
eat there asa
new Correct your spelling
as
places
open because they like to eat in different places
. People
of this
type make friends in many places
. That is
why they eat in new places
. And if they enjoy the places
, they can visit again. Such
people
are actually very happy, that is
they spend most of their lives traveling
with family and friends. They love to travel and visit many Change the spelling
travelling
places
. People
of this
type are rare. And they spend their lives as they please. I think that is
a
good quality.
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apply
Secondly
, such
people
often go to the same place
and they eat in the same places
all the time. They do not like to eat anywhere else, because they get used to where they eat . They avoid diversity. Because they do not like it. Is
Correct your spelling
If
they
go to a restaurant with their family, they will choose that Correct your spelling
the
place
with their family. That is
why they always eat there.
In conclusion, a lot of people
like to eat in different places
, which is good and some people
love to eat in the same place
, In my view, it is even better and I agree with thatSubmitted by Weallneedit9 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite