Government should spend more money on medical research and less on researching the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, it is true that the
government
spends a lot of financial resources on medical
research
instead
of
environment
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research
.
However
, I am of the opinion that
environment
research
should
been
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paid more than medical
research
and I will try to explain my opinion in my essay.
Firstly
, both of the researches depend on each other and if the plant in
environment
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dies,
then
there will not be
use
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the use
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of medical
research
because
the
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most of
medicine
is prepared from plants.
Secondly
, if we harm the
environment
,
consequences
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the consequences
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will be very bad because the chain of life
in
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our
planet
depends on
state
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the state
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of
environment
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the environment
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and if the
environment
is harmed, all alive creatures will die.
Thirdly
, if the
environment
will be harmed or destroyed,
in
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our
planet
cataclysms will begin,
for instance
, earthquakes may occur and
sun
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the sun
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may burn our
planet
or there may be an extinction of life
in
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our
planet
. We
also
should protect our
environment
by planting trees, throwing trash in the trash cans and doing everything in our power.
However
, while environmental
researches
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research
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should be allocated more funds,
government
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the government
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should
also
donate
for
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medical
researches
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because in 21 century we have a lot of diseases and for healing these diseases,
government
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the government
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should spend money
for
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the development of
medicine
.
For example
, if
medicine
does not develop, humanity will have big problems in the face of cancer, HIV infection, diabetes mellitus and, especially, COVID-19. To avoid these problems the
government
should develop
medicine
. To conclude, I would agree that the
government
should donate more
on
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environment
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research
than medical
research
but
government
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the government
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should not forget about medical development, too.
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