Some people like to try new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with. Discuss both these attitudes and give your opinion.
There are creative
people
which like to try new and different things
such
as travelling interesting
places, eating antique dishes, Change preposition
to interesting
however
, there are also
people
who are afraid of taking Add an article
a risk
the risk
risk
and prefer to keep doing Fix the agreement mistake
risks
things
they are familiar with.
To begin
with the first
type of people
, they
are interested in everything Correct pronoun usage
apply
that is
new or attractive and do not fear from
doing them. They like to test themselves in complicated Change preposition
apply
things
and get energy, motivation from doing these kind
of activities. They travel around the world, learn Change the determiner
this kind
these kinds
culture
and taste national meals Change preposition
about culture
of
different countries. Change preposition
from
Life
becomes boring for them without such
kind of actions. They also
often change their specialization and work in various fields. World
outlook of them is wide as those Add an article
The world
people
encountered colourful situations before.
The second
type of people
do not like changes and prefer doing things
which are familiar for
them. It is difficult to reach success for Change preposition
to
these kind
of Change the determiner
this kind
these kinds
people
,
because they do not want to take Remove the comma
apply
risk
in their Fix the agreement mistake
risks
life
. These people
are used to do
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doing
Correct article usage
the same
same
Correct your spelling
some
things
and it will be difficult if their life
has alteration. Also
these Add a comma
,Also
people
have a problem with finding their place in society as there are being changes now.
To conclude, in my opinion
the Add the comma(s)
,opinion
first
group of people
is more successful than the second
one in society. Because they do not fear from
taking Change preposition
apply
Add an article
a risk
the risk
risk
and they enjoy Fix the agreement mistake
risks
from
their Change preposition
apply
life
by doing new and interesting things
. So I prefer to do new activitiesSubmitted by Weallneedit9 on
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