Some people think that large , impressive buildings are important for a city. Others believe that the money should be spent on improving schools and hospitals. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In today's world cities are given

importantane

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important

importance

compared to villages, a good infrastructure is more important for a city. While others believe that the expenses could be used for the better improvement of

hospitals

and

schools

. The reasons are discussed

further

in the essay.

Firstly

, as technology is increasing rapidly day by day, the facilities are

also

upcoming in many cities. Meanwhile, many people think that

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good infrastructure is important for a developed city or country.

For instance

, Mumbai is

the

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city

which

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that

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has huge and amazing buildings and it's

also

famous for

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construction while many of them use it in

a

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the

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opposite way because of tall buildings

such

as for suicide attempts and many more. It is risky for all.

Secondly

, a small amount of expense should

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for government

schools

and

hospitals

too.

However

, maintaining good cleanliness in both places attracts

the

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publicity

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to come.

For instance

, many places are avoided in terms of expenses and

such

as

schools

and

hospitals

whereas these are the places where an individual can gain his or her career and grab the opportunities in their life. To conclude, in my

opinion

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schools

and

hospitals

are important and they should be well maintained for the good purpose, attractions are

also

needed but education and health should be given more priority.