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Some countries spend a lot of money on making it easier to use bicycles in cities, why? Is this the best way to solve traffic problems?

#countries #money #bicycles #cities #traffic
One of the major civic
issue
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 in all the developed cities of the world is
traffic
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a traffic
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jam
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. City planners and corporations are trying to resolve the problem by spending ample
money
 on creating infrastructure for bicycles and promoting it heavily among the masses. Only time will tell, whether the
money
 spent will resolve the problem or waste
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taxpayers
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tax payers
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hard earned
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money
. With the population explosion and increase in purchase capacity of the urban residents, vehicle jam is a common scenario. People want to travel from one place to another quickly and effortlessly, which is easily possible with other modes of transport
,
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 while riding
cycle
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a cycle
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 requires
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 of strength and stamina for
longer
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distance
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. Sitting in
car
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 or public transport and moving is very comfortable, which is not the case with the cycles. Bicycles are known for being
an
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 healthy alternative for the riders and
doesnot
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does not
doesn't
 create any kind of pollution. After creating
separate
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 lane, a bicycle takes very
less
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 space to ride on the roads. Many nations allocate
high
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 amount of budget for creating
such
 lanes, but the use of bicycles
are
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 very less among its citizens, henceforth more
money
 is spent on advertisements to lure citizens to ride the bike
instead
 of other means of transportation. There is
huge
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 debate going amongst key
personnels
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personnel
 and
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stakeholders
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stake holders
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 of municipal corporations on the Return of Investment for the budget spent on the alternative modes of travelling. While cycles are getting popular and used on weekends to roam around, everyday usage of
it
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 is yet to be seen globally.
Traffic
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The traffic
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 problem is only worsening day after day and developed countries have to find an effective solution for it.
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