Cars damage the environment and their use is increasing. Why? How can this be controlled?

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have long been known as

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of human beings. Yet they pose a threat to the environment; paradoxically,

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usage of them is still growing and becoming more popular. In

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on

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issue as well as

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how

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could address it. There are two main reasons why

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continue to commute by

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regardless of their impacts on the environment.

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vehicles could per se substitute cars due to the convenience that they bring to users.

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, having full control of the journey is a critical point of driving private

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.

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could drive whenever they want without being interfered

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external factors.

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of all, there is a much higher level of safety and security for driving a car relative to

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public transport

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as buses.

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,

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could help

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stay away from unintended problems.

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, girls tend to avoid choosing bus services at night because they are prone to face

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criminals like thieves, bullies, or even murderers. Notwithstanding, governments could cope with these issues by enacting policies pertaining to public transport. To address the

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problem, governments could bank on the bus system with more cutting-edge and comfortable buses. At the same time, subsidising the ticket price is a favourable solution to raise the demand

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using buses by citizens.

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, more and more

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will use the public service due to its economical value offered.

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, safety and security will be improved, if there are more CCTV cameras outfitted on each bus. Given

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, criminals would lose their incentives to commit a crime, while citizens feel much safer to opt for

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a vehicle;

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,

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and

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private

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would appear on

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. By and large, it is understandable that

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are still in favour of cars when it comes to commuting and travelling. Governments should spare no effort to bring

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transit system closer to each person. Only by doing so could we combat

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crisis, which is truly a catastrophe to the whole

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