The governments should expend more money on medical researching and fewer researching the environment

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should expend more cash on medical exploration and fewer researching the

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idea is not appropriate because if the

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is clean, the demand for medical will decrease. So, I think the

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should spend more

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on researching the

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, researchers might find a lot of minerals.

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situation will bring profit to

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. If the

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is very dirty, people will stumble to a lot of illnesses. For

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reason, there are many ways to keep the

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clean.

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method is to put garbage trucks on every street or every district. The

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method is to create a special trash limited region and its do control. Of course, with the help of government investment.

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should

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spend

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on medical

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. I think if medical researchers are conducting

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, lots of illnesses might find a cure. Later, in-country the

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country a lot of people will get rid of their diseases. All

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, of course, requires investment from

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expending more

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on medical

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is good because medicine should

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fast develop.

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cash

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the

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is very fine because where there is cleanliness, there is always life and cleanliness is always important. To summarise, medical researchers and the

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environment

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require

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money

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. I think the

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should spend more

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on researching the

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