Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is a common belief that many governments think that
roads
are more important than rail line
in their country. Fix the agreement mistake
lines
However
, there is a more persuasive argument that developing rail line
is more helpful than improving Fix the agreement mistake
lines
roads
.
On the one hand, most of
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apply
houses
have their own car so many Add an article
the houses
society
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societies
want
to various roadways If there are not come up with traffic jam. Change the verb form
wants
Moreover
, If roads
are improved, a lot of transport and travel businesses are able to develop because cars can go everywhere such
as top or mountain, rural and isolated locations. For example
, products are able to deliver many places then
the customers who use the company are increasing more and more. Plus, people can visit and experience other places so it will be linked to the development of tourism.
Nevertheless
, developing railways is more effective than roads
. Although
the home has their
own car, it is true that many people who do not have Correct pronoun usage
its
drivers
license or something uncomfortable in their body use transportation that have to need rails Add an article
a drivers
also
have to. Furthermore
, If railways are improved, many jobs that related with will be formed. For instance
, there are some people need who have the ability to build rails and when it ends up there is someone who have
to need who should take care of Change the verb form
has
this
. The corporations that operate the transportations also
need.
To sum up, while there are some advantages that developing roads
. On the other hand
, It is evident that improving railways is more prominent in the country.Submitted by vezeta0504 on
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