Some children receive almost no encouragement from their parents regarding their performance at school, while other children receive too much pressure from their over- enthusiastic parents which can have a negative impact on the child. Why do you think some parents put too much pressure on their children to perform well at school? What do you think the role of a parent should be in their child's education?

We know that every people need encouragement during their life
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school
years. But some
parents
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children
and give
pressure
.
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children
have a negative effect
from
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their
parents
. Most
parents
think that putting too much
pressure
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their
children
show well at
school
.But I think that it is not
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idea. Because
Children
need
a
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bid support and encouragement at their
school
and
education
. If
children
can not take attention
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their
parents
,
this
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their studies. Absolutely, we can say
children
's
education
and
behavior
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is depend
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on parent's attitude to their
children
. Our encouragement gives
to
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our
children
confidence.
Therefore
they can reach their aims. On the other side, some
children
need
pressure
. Because their family atmosphere
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this
attitude.
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some
children
need
strict
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attitude
by
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their
parents
during their
school
education
. interactions bad influence them
maght
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might
change their moral and studies.
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method is frequently used
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behavior
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children
. So it
is belong
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belongs
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to
children
's
behavior
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In conclusion, I think that in
education
every
parents
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have a great role for their
children
. Because
parents
should give
a
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support not
pressure
to their
children
when they need
a
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help.
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this
way
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we can gain our intention by seeing our
children
's achievements. Oppositely, if we limit our
children
, their studies and
behavior
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may change bad side. That's
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way
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, we should focus on our
children
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at
school
.
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