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disscuss advantages and disadvanteage online learning

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nowadays,the development of the internet and technology has made learning easier and studying online is becoming increasingly popular.
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 essay will be discussing the positive and negative inspect of online study. As regards the advantages,
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,online learning offers teaches teachers an efficient way to deliver lessons to their pupils since it has a number of powerful tools
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 as videos,pdf and podcasts which can use as part of their lesson plans.
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,online education allows
students
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 to attend classes from any location of their choice.
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,online lectures can be recorded or archived for future reference.
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 help
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 access the learning material at the time of their comfort.
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,because of e-learning ,adults can take distance learning course and
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 as
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 other skills like music,art on depending their location.
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 ,studying online may bring negative effects to the learning environment.one of the disadvantages is that many
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 find a challenging to focus on the screen for a long period of time.another drawback of online classes is the cost.to some extent,online studies are costly as well because they need advanced computers,laptops or iPad which are too expensive for a normal person to purchase.
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,there will be a high consumption of electricity for the usages of these devices. to conclude,it can not be denied that e-learning has both pros and cons.despite the fact that it may be convenient for some people ,there are
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 disadvantages like feeling high cost and isolated.
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