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Some people like to try new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with. Discuss both these attitudes and give your opinion.

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Supporters of
this
 viewpoint say that some
people
 like to try
new
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experience
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experiences
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, like visiting various locations and tasting new food.
However
,other
people
 do not like to make
changes
 in their
routine
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. Both sides have their own pros and cons,
therefore
, before communicating
on
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my view, I will discuss both views in the following paragraphs. All
people
 in the world are different, everyone 's choice of trying new things or not
are
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also
 vary. The
people
 who keep doing the same things may be afraid of being upset. If,
for instance
, they go to a new place to try
new
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 dish but they identify that the food is not in their taste and they really get upset and at the
end
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 they have
feeling
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a feeling
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 of dissatisfaction. If they just eat somewhere they have been before , maybe there will be a lack of excitement but at least they won't be disappointed. I personally do not agree with
this
 way of living.
People
 who like great
changes
,
on the other hand
 , usually have
positive
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 attitude to life. These
kind
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 of
people
 are more flexible to every condition and hardships in the world
moreover
 they have
strong
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 feeling of courage to change something in their life. As for me , if I travel around the world and try food with
unique
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a unique
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 taste, I will be impressed positively a lot. In conclusion, everyone and everything
need
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changes
, despite
people
 can accept or cannot accept
changes
 easily.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Novelty
  • Routine
  • Comfort zone
  • Risk-taker
  • Risk-averse
  • Enrichment
  • Personal growth
  • Innovation
  • Creativity
  • Stability
  • Tradition
  • Habit
  • Familiarity
  • Personal enrichment
  • Life stages
  • Fulfilling
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