You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your family is going to move to another town. Write a letter to the Principal of a local school asking if they will accept your son. Describe his academic achievements and scope of interests. You do NOT need to write any address. You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir or Madam, My family and I are moving to Athens

month. So, I am writing to you to ask if your school will accept my son. Knowing that our new address will be 101 Davis street apartment B 10. And our son's age is 7 years old (

first

grade). Let me describe his academic achievements so that you can know a little bit about him. Even though our son grew up in Egypt, his communication skills in English are outstanding. He got A+ in English. He is

also

advanced in math so much that he can multiply 2 numbers fast without using calculators. Regarding his scope of interest, he is physically active and he likes sports. Recently, he learned how to swim. Add to that, he loves playing soccer.

That is

why I think he will be successful at your school. I hope you will consider replying to me favourably if you have time. Thank you for your consideration. Best regards, Jay

Submitted by aymanshabakaa on Sat Feb 19 2022

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7 paragraphs

165 words

9.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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