Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion.
Technology is developing rapidly day by day. Because of that,
people
who live in one country can enjoy the cultures of all other areas without considering ages and nationality. I totally agree with this
statement and I will discuss further
it within this
essay.
Music
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that
Music
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music
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For example
, most of
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Moreover
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Sri
Lanka, all Sri
Lankans without thinking culture enjoy both Sinhala and Tamil songs
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like to enjoy music
without considering ages
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their ages
Finally
, I personally believe that music
is the most suitable bond to bind all the cultures and the different age’s persons together.Submitted by nipunakane123 on
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